Nurse

The nurses/paramedic will come into the scene with a medical bag wearing a big jacket that will be visual. This will show that help has come.

Props List

The props list is quite simple and easy to get so this wasn't a problem for our group to get a hold of.

Bands Image

The image of the band is quite a rock/emo look, wearing leather jacket, high tops and a t shirt they have a very causal look that will appeal to a young audience as they have a similar look to young boys.   

Feed Back on Final Pitch idea

Looking at the feed back we got, We decided to take their advise and look into a performance idea for our music video instead of just the images of this teenage Boy, at first we weren't sure this would work as the words to the lyrics are very synthesised and would look weird with a performing band but if we tried to make it fit with he images we have in mind for our video it could work quite well if the lead singer/band just blended into the scenes. Muse - Neutron star shows the sort of idea we were looking into for our performance element just showing silhouette of the band.

Looking into Location ideas for Music video

This is a shut down Hospital for the mentally ill that is still standing today but has not been taken over by any body it is in Epsom West Park. This would be a great location for our music video as it shows the loneliness the boy feels and how he got bullied here in the first place to try and fit in with a group.

Final Pitch Idea

The idea we finally decided to pitch for our music video was 'Climbing up the walls' by Radiohead which is a mellow, slow tempoed and trippy song where we could reflect loads of images we filmed and edit them on top of eachother and fading into each other to create a messy confused teenage who is lost in his own thoughts. It will look at how a teenager aged 16-17 copes when everything goes wrong, for example his mother has died and his father has turn acholic and he gets beaten up its look at the struggle he goes through at school and fitting in. We pitched our idea to the rest of the group to get there feed back.

Showing feed back

This was the first time I tried Wordle just a try out to see how it worked and I found that you need to use more then 10 words to make the image look better and mroe exciting.

Using the word cloud look at the most promenent words that came out of my feed back and what I needed to look at to help make my idea for a music video better.