Saturday, 30 October 2010

Final idea pitch for Thriller

We had to present our final idea as a group to the class and what are final plot would be. They liked the idea of using a swimming pool and doing some underwater shots, it would make it intresting and different to other peoples thrillers or horrors as we would use different films ideas.
Plot

-       Girl alone in swimming pool, swimming along.
-       Cuts from different shots e.g. underwater shots or close ups of her breathing as she is swimming.
-       Cuts to POV shot of a hand slams against a window outside the pool.
-       Cut straight back to her catching her breath as she continues swimming, short shot of her feet kicking (doesn’t notice hand against window.)
-       Cut back to hand sliding down glass making a noise.
-       Cut back to girl swimming
-       She reaches the end of the pool to check timer, see how fast she has done a number of laps.
-       Puts timer down, starts swimming again.
-       Door opens, someone comes in
-       Shot of feet walking towards end of pool.
-       Girl about to reach the end again, where man is standing (she hasn’t noticed)
-       Man reaches end of pool standing there waiting.
-       See reflection of man through the water.
-       Shot of her come out of the water towards edge of the pool, she gets a fright.
-       See man for the first time, her dad telling her its dinner.
-       She responds. ‘I’ll be there in 5 minutes dad…thanks’
-       Dad walks out.
-       She gets out of pool, puts towel on.
-       Walks out of pool room (POV shot form outside, someone still watching her.)   


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