1. It would open on a black screen with sound in the back ground of a girl crying and a women asking what happened (like an interview is going on) it then opens on a teenage girl walking down a deserted road with music in the background and heavy breathing over the top. There will no houses, woods or cars just a long road. She is wearing a dress with blood and mud on it and her dress is ripped like there has been a struggle she is still crying with make-up smudged down her face. As she is walking down this road, there will be flash backs of where she has come from but really short shots. She eventually sees this house ahead of her, when she reaches the house she knocks and you hear footsteps coming to the door when the door opens she screams. That will then cut to a blackout and the title of the movie will come up. THIS WAS OUR SECOND CHOICE, IF OUR FIRST IDEA GOT REJECTED.
2. There will be an old big house where a young girl will be babysitting two children, both young girls. As she is watching TV she can hear noises, like whispering and crying so she goes up stairs to check the children who are fast asleep, she then goes back downstairs and carries on washing up when she hears it again she then goes back up stairs to check again and both children are gone. When she turns around it blackout and all you hear is a scream. You then have images of one of the young girls on a swing, singing but it keeps changing between the child being happy and then to her with bloody on all over her but she still singing and looks happy. At this point there will be music playing and the main title will come
3. It will open on a crying girl who’s lying on a wooden floor she has a cut on her head and she’s waking up from being knocked out. We then see a hand with a knife in it with blood all over the knife and his hand; she is crying out for help and trying to get the man to stop. We then focus on her eyes for a while, as she is crying. It then cuts to the title.
4. It will open on a man sitting in a rundown flat on a table with loads of pictures of random people walking along the street, coming out of houses and getting on with their lives. He’s sorting through all the pictures and looking through books; hi hands are dirty and are cut. He gets to a certain picture and stops too look at it for a long time, he then picks up a pen and digs into her face like he has something agents her, he then gets a lighter and burns it, he puts it on the table and gets up and walks out we are still focusing on the burning picture on the table and we here him walking out and slamming the door.
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